Hmm very nice but you need to add more commas for your tears. Also when you’re tearing your hair out in frustration at the futility of the world lay off the caps lock, thank you. Okay now continue pouring out your feelings for our supreme judgement and never ending criticism *snort snort*.
Poets have it rough, I’ve got serious respect for anyone who tries to pursue the flighty career of poetry. It ain’t no walk in the park, more like an obstacle course from hell with people critiquing your use of iambic pentameter and semi colons. Oh yeah well let me shove something up your semi colon you self righteous holier than thou critical- Oh you liked it? Well then… thanks for your “constructive criticism” we’ll be in touch.
Nobody puts their personal life on display more than poets do.
We make our heartaches sound grammatically pleasing.
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